Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, February 8, 2013

People should be more responsible with their pets by: Kelis


Hi again hopefully you’ll like this one more than the other.  I think owners should be more responsible with their pets.  I think this because you’ll learn why owners should care & be more responsible with their pets.


Owners should be more caring with their pets.  For example owners should care more for their pets some owners abandon them, others abuse their pets. Some pets are home alone and some of them are stolen.  When people go out they should take their  pets them so they won’t be so lonely.  Owners should be supportive tored their pets like don’t abandon them or don’t abuse them.  Owners should stay home more with their pets that shows a lot of care for them & their more responsible.

Owners should watch their pets more.  Owners should let their pets outside,  but they should go outside with them.  In addition their pets could run away or even get taken by another person when they don’t pay attention to their pets.  Some owners go outside with their pets other owners don’t go outside with their pets when they're supposed to.  Owners should play with their pets/pet outside that’s like watching their pets.

People should train their pets perfectly.  In order to people should train their pets more often.  Owners should train their pets so their pets will learn how not to do accidents in the house.  Also because their pets would bite other people who come to the owners house.  Most importantly owners  should really train their pets because their pets can most definitely   
 run away.

Finally you know why I think people should be more responsible with their pets.  Now hopefully you learned what I taught you.  For instance how to be more responsible with your pets.  Bye for now.

Friday, March 16, 2012

gathering information for historical figures

Here are the links to use as you gather information for your biography project


Thursday, March 1, 2012

Having Siblings Make Family Fun by Gabriella Lowery


having siblings make family fun
by : Gabriella
Lowery

Do you have siblings at home?
At my house siblings are fun to have. At my house this is true for me when play with them and boss them around and help them with there homework.

At my house siblings are fun to have because I like to play with them. This happen to me ones I was outside by myself and I was bored so I asked if James would play with me? He said yes, so I played with him then I was not lonely anymore. I was happy.


At my house siblings are fun to have because I can boss them around. This happen to me ones when I told Elijah to turn off the light. Luckily he did. I was so relieved.  At my house siblings are fun to have because you can help with them with there homework. This happen to me ones when my brother had to do speed sort he asked me to help him I said why cant mom do it but mom was  busy folding laundry so I said OK and I timed him. It was boring. I was mad.


At my house siblings are fun to have because I can play with them and boss them around and I can help them with there homework. So I don't know about but I do really really really love my siblings.

Friday, February 24, 2012

Cristina asks, "Do you have siblings at home?"


Do you got siblings at home?  My siblings are fun when we play outside and see moves and when we eat.

  My siblings are fun when we play outside.  One day we played outside then my dad came and hit me with the ball then I went and get him.  He did not see the big rock then he trip with the rock my mom came out and said come and get me.  I saw how my dad was trying to get her but then my brother jump on me and he as chocking me I trow him then he start to get me.  Because I trow him down I got hit by a rock because he could not get me.
    
      My siblings are fun when we see moves.  One day we was watching a move then my dad change  the move then my brother got the popcorn and went to the room and saw the move.  We went to then all were in the room my dad was sleeping then I was watching the move then my dad got me and change the move I went to the room I was watching the move but then I  went to the living room to play the computer then my dad scared me and I jumped up because he had a mask on.  Then I start to fallow him but he fell and ever one started laughing.               
  
   My siblings are fun when we eat.  One day we started to eat and all my brothers and dad got there food.  My mom was cooking then my dad and my brothers put there food in my plate but my mom saw me with the most food.   I finished the food then I went to the bike and started to fallow them for putting food in my plate.
        
  My siblings are fun when we play outside, see moves, and eat.  Don’t hate your siblings.        









Written by: Cristina S.

Thursday, March 17, 2011

writing topic videos

Here are a few videos that you might find helpful as you gather in Formation for your non fiction topic.  Enjoy!

This video is a basic introduction to the changes to the food pyramid. 


Cookie Monster explains healthy food choices in a way that only Cookie Monster could. ;-)


 
The First Lady introduces Let's Move and her goals to help improve healthy living in kids across the country. 

A video about food in space.

A taste test of some space food - where everything is freeze dried or comes out of a pouch.
 

NASA kids explain space food.

Professor Retro explains the history of space food.

 
Living on the International Space Station (ISS).

Tuesday, March 15, 2011

writing research links

What is the food pyramid and how can we use it to guide our food choices?

First Paragraph: Introduction (What is the food pyramid)

Second Paragraph: Why it is important

Third Paragraph: Effects of not using it

Fourth Paragraph: How I use the food pyramid

Conclusion: Putting it all together


What foods do astronauts eat in space and how do they prepare it?

First Paragraph: Introduction (what, how, and why it’s important)

Second Paragraph: What they eat (vacuum sealed food)

Third Paragraph: How they prepare their food to eat in space

Fourth Paragraph: The importance of eating a balanced diet, even in space.

Fifth Paragraph: Conclusion


Do vegetarians meet all their nutritional needs without eating any meat?

First Paragraph: What is a vegetarian and your opinion?

Second-Fourth Paragraph: Reasons to support yes or no

Conclusion: Putting it all together

Friday, March 11, 2011

Where does poetry hide for us????


Poetry hides everywhere .... and I mean everywhere!  Here is where poetry hides for us.....

Tuesday, November 23, 2010

Look at this awesome writer!


Emalee is a great writer!  She works very hard on her words!  She even wrote this blog post - and she is only in first grade!  I can't wait to see her in fourth grade in a few years!


Emalee and her sister, Alexis, celebrating her story!